i really like the premise and how we are given some background of the characters and the world without it all feeling heavy to read. i didn't immediately think of Hakan (referring to your latest post), even if i can totally see the similarities lol, but both are likable so far (especially him, for obvious reasons~). I do agree there could be more, i totally expected something like the human doing chores, talking to the kids and some dialogue with the director, while the derg could have some trouble on his way to the tavern (tied to the previous vegetable cart accident?) or while renting the room.
there are some typos, mostly "wont", "cant" and one "its" instead of "it's" once, a few inverted letters or doubles, but not much. I did also notice some good situations where having a choice could be fun, like replying in a slightly different way or daring to hug the derg before leaving him to the orphans or not, but i take it those will come (can't wait to hunt for juicy bad ends~).
But yeah, i like the setting, chars and story so far, the artstyle is great and the, uh, "cutscene" was an adorably welcome surprise.
It depends on a lot of things. I am not going to commit to a 'one big update per month' goal that I see other VN creators struggle with, at least starting out.
However, there should be an update coming relatively soon that expands on the prologue and fixes some issues on mobile :3
Yes, the two main characters will bond more and more over time in a way beyond sexual attraction. However, most of the lewd scenes involving other characters will be the opposite.
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i really like the premise and how we are given some background of the characters and the world without it all feeling heavy to read. i didn't immediately think of Hakan (referring to your latest post), even if i can totally see the similarities lol, but both are likable so far (especially him, for obvious reasons~). I do agree there could be more, i totally expected something like the human doing chores, talking to the kids and some dialogue with the director, while the derg could have some trouble on his way to the tavern (tied to the previous vegetable cart accident?) or while renting the room.
there are some typos, mostly "wont", "cant" and one "its" instead of "it's" once, a few inverted letters or doubles, but not much. I did also notice some good situations where having a choice could be fun, like replying in a slightly different way or daring to hug the derg before leaving him to the orphans or not, but i take it those will come (can't wait to hunt for juicy bad ends~).
But yeah, i like the setting, chars and story so far, the artstyle is great and the, uh, "cutscene" was an adorably welcome surprise.
Aww, thanks! Much appreciated! And I have a feeling the prologue extension will satisfy a few of your recommendations :)
Just a minor bug, there are a couple moments after the dragonkin leaves the orphanage that the game uses his default name even if you've changed it.
Oh! Will fix, thanks for saying something.
Edit: I went thru and fixed other, similar bugs.
Another amazing project to follow and enter in my collection!
for the story so far it's 10/10
art style 10/10 and i love how different they are
this is a great start, very short, but still 👍 i enjoyed it, looking forward to the next update
Hello, love it so far. How often will you be updating?
It depends on a lot of things. I am not going to commit to a 'one big update per month' goal that I see other VN creators struggle with, at least starting out.
However, there should be an update coming relatively soon that expands on the prologue and fixes some issues on mobile :3
Okay sorry to ask about updates, I just really enjoyed the prologue
Will this have romance?
Yes, the two main characters will bond more and more over time in a way beyond sexual attraction. However, most of the lewd scenes involving other characters will be the opposite.
Thanks for asking :)